By: Elena Zhao C2


By: Elena Zhao C2
During this unit, we also wrote a CERER essay after the researching for 3 different articles about the topic that we chose. we started with the evidence section, continuing with reasoning. Consequently, after having individual conference with Ms. Sawyer, we will finalize our essay by writing a introduction and conclusion in a unified format. Eventually, at the day for the presentation, we will explain the positive and negative impacts of the transportation or communication, and who are responsible to fix these problems, and it succeed or not, which is been written in the essay earlier. We will also be graded on our essays to check if our essay’s meets all the criteria.
One thing I did well in my essay is I am informative on my essay by writing all the information from the graphic organizer into my essay. Additionally, I can fully interpret my evidence and not repeating the similar information in different evidence. One thing I still need to learn to do is to describe how my reasoning can led the evidence to be connected with my claim and my thesis of the topic I had chosen and to be more concise for reader to have a more profound understanding of my explanation.











