What did we do?
In this unit we researched about a technology of our choice and I chose the typewriter. When I heard the topic of this unit was about communication, The first thing that popped into my mind was the typewriter as it was revolutionized the world of literature.
Before starting to write the essay, we reviewed the CER format to know how to write it properly with the right steps. When we took 3 classes to take notes, we needed to download essays and print them.We also needed to annotate it, and I annotated the essays with care, trying to understand the topic well. While annotating, we also needed to fill out the graphic organizer to organize all the knowledge in the essay we are reading.
At the end we basically combined all of the humongous information and write it into 3 paragraphs, talking about the positive impact, negative impact, and how we fixed it or try to fix it. Lastly, we added the intro and the conclusion.
What did I do well in my essay and what did I not?
I was aiming to write my essay to be really formal and Mr. Tyner thought I did well with that. My writing style was really formal and smooth, making the reader to understand it smoothly. The writing was very well structured and had a great syntax. It caught the readers attention and it didn’t make the readers feel bored.
Even though the writing structure was good, the information in the paragraph was pretty far away from the impact the typewriter had. I should have focused more on the typewriters rather than the events. This caused my essay to have a weaker argument. Next time, I should try to get more source connected to the typewriter. But I gotta admit, it is really hard to find articles about typewriters these days.



















