In this essay I listed negative and positive impacts of the HSR(High-Speed-Rail) using evidence from articles. i first made a graphic organizer to list out my information from each article. I then used the information to make paragraphs describing the impact on people and the economy.
Something I think I did well was finding effective and relevant information for the essay since I was able to find articles with much information. I was able to fill in most of my graphic organizer and pick out the most important evidence from it.
Something I think I didn’t do as well was assembling the evidence and creating the actual essay. I say this because my first version had barely any reasoning and much of it was restating my evidence. I do believe that rewriting it a second time has made it better though.








