

After deciding on the mode of communication or transportation we are going to look into, we dived into research. We explored how to identify credible sources and how to annotate articles effectively. We then set off to find 3 useful articles relating to our topic and annotated them in a method that answers the essential question. After using various colors of highlighters to differentiate vital information from those that are inapplicable, we put the key information into a graphic organizer, systemizing our research. Once we gathered all the information required, we began writing the CER essay based on the following structure: a hook, body paragraph 1 positive impacts, body paragraph 2 negative impacts, body paragraph 3 who fixed the negative impacts, and to sum it all up, the conclusion.
What I think I did well was the graphic organizer, in which I articulated key points clearly, used key words from sources, and effectively identified multiple pieces of evidence from various sources that strongly support my key paragraphs. As for the essay, I succeeded in providing relevant and well-selected evidence, effectively supporting my claim. My citations are accurate, and the connection between my evidence and claim is clear.
On the other hand, I still need to work on sufficiently using class time, which I failed to do, resulting me to needing to stay after school to finalize the essay. I also need to work on strengthening the bridge between my evidence and my claim. Focusing on explicitly articulating how the data supports my conclusion.










