What did we do?
Composed a nonfiction essay describing and analyzing differences between the original novel and the film adaptation of “The Giver.”
What have we been learning?
Academic Essay Organization
-Introduction Paragraph with Interesting Hook, Background Info, and Thesis Statement
– Strong Body Paragraphs with Clear Transitions
-Conclusion Paragraph with Thesis Statement, Analysis, and Closing Thoughts
What’s Working:
What worked was the two body paragraph, I put all the important details in the two body paragraph. Also, I didn’t use first person or second person in my essay, and I used Raina AI to give me some suggestions on how to write a good interesting opening and closing statement. I used AI for revising small mistakes that I did not fix in my essay, but not asking AI to write the essay for me.
Areas for Growth:
What was challenging was definitely the conclusion paragraph because for me, it was really hard on how to end the essay properly and how to make the reader remember my essay as a really good one. Another challenge was writing a good hook to convince my reader to continue reading. How I deal with this challenges was asking AI on how to write a good concluding paragraph, asking how I should end the essay and ask AI for an interesting hook type for my essay.
Personal Relevance:
This can help me by preparing for high school and higher grades, so I don’t have to struggle writing an good, strong essay. AI can strengthen my writing by asking for good suggestions for my hook, introduction paragraph, conclusion paragraph, and more.