What are we doing
Academic paragraph about character Analysis
What are we learning
paragraph structure- topic sentences, transitions, conclusion
What’s working ?
I improved my writing by putting more detail.
Areas for growth
Personal relevance
Category: English Language Arts
What are we doing
Reading The Thing About Georgie and deterimng imporant
What are we learning
How to add character train based on evidence[characters, actions words, another character’s Reactions]
What’s is working
How was my understanding of how to write a paragraph improve since August my ability show that I need to add more details but I did a good job in explaining what the story was about and what happened to Georgie
Areas for growth
My ears have growth that I need to work on is on detail because when I write my paragraph I want to see all that detail so I get a better grade.
Personal relevance
I’m similar to Georgie because I get angry sometimes like when my brother hits me and he gets angry because he’s trying to figure out if his parents are trying to replace him because he’s a dwarf
What are we doing
Writing a fictional story based on a theme that matters to me.
What are we learning
Theme (my purpose for writing this story, my message to readers)
Character Development (creating believable characters with positive & negative traits)
Plot (the sequence of events in my story; Western and Eastern approaches to storytelling)
Setting (the world that I create for my story)
What’s is working
What story elements did you enjoy planning and writing? (Explain why you enjoyed them) cause it is fun and you can put lots of your creative ideas
What elements of my story are you proud of? (Explain why)
I was proud that I wrote a very long story
How did you get the idea for your story?
it’s basically from Cinderella and I changed some parts of the story
The Best Line from My Story: (Include your favorite sentence or phrase from your story and then explain why you like it) when she asked her mother that the prince doesn’t like her, then just go do your quack dance to him
Areas for growth
What story elements were challenging to plan and write? (Explain why you enjoyed them) challenging part of is thinking about good idea ideas to write the whole story
How did you deal with these challenges? That she had to live with her stepmother that which was very mean to her and to everything
What is your least favorite part of the story? Why does it bother you? That stepmother and stepsister are not talking to her
Personal relevance
I think it is important because when you grow up, you want to be a illustrator you can come up with a creative idea and thinks this things that you were when you’re little and then put them together and make a story