Write a short paragraph explaining what the task was and why you chose to do your presentation in this format.
I chose to do this format because i was very used to coding games and i thought about how cool it would be to make a roblox game and make it about educational things such as my topic (planes).
Write one thing that you think you did well
I think i did really well on my maps and also models for the game and i thought i did really well on modeling the plane and making it look perfect.
Write one thing you think you need to work on for next time
I think next time i would add music and also like different sfx to make the game a better experience for people that wants to play the game.
One thing i did well on my essay was that i have good evidence and reasoning. I have multiple different good evidence to support my claim and its really helpful for my presentation
One thing I still need to learn to do.
One thing i need to do is too is too much of your paragraphs are evidence and need more reasoning, In addition, you do not have a proper introduction. Lastly, please stay away from asking questions to the reader and from being informal in your writing.
Write a brief summary of what steps you went through to get to essay.
I first looked at the essays and collected the information, after that i used all the information and wrote my first draft, after that i checked my work with Mr, Tyner and he revised my work, after that i used all the things i needed to improve and wrote my final draft to create this essay. The steps to improve is to not check with Mr, Tyner to much and go with my own ideas.
The decide me and my team made is a comic and it shows how the main character uses his brain to remember about the decide model and chooses not to drink the alcohol. I learned that the effects of drinking is that you feel very dizzy and also you have a risk of drinking and driving and also have mental and physical damage to your body.
I used to think trusted influences on the internet needed to have lots of fans and views to be trusted but then i found out that even influences with lots of fans lied and some influences with small amounts of fans were trustworthy.
But now I know that the numbers of follower does not matter and its if the fact that they state is real or not and licensed by real doctors of scientist or a legal source.
I assumed that Aston Hall was trustworthy but now i know not all of the facts that he states are not true, one fact that he stated was using banana peels to wipe on his face, although this might be real but its not statistically proven by scientist.
I now understand how to use proportional relationships in life and also to solve birthday party
N – What new information do you have?
some new information that i just learned was to improve on my skills to use proportional relationships in real life and also in the math world.
I – What is interesting about the unit?
Something interesting in this unit was that it was based off a birthday party and we had to make our own birthday poster and we could invite anyone even the dead.
T – What was tricky for you?
The tricky part was trying to finish in time and finishing everything accurately another problem that happened was to write all the the full sentences at the end of all of the questions.
I did advertising because i feel like advertisement is really common and people can see it when watching videos, listening to music or in a game.
Advertisement helped me show how grow a garden was not just a regular game and it actually helped people to slow down when they were felling depressed or bored and even angry, it wasn’t like the other games with lots of blood and terror and it started another genre of games.
If this was a traditional question where everyone had to make the same type of project it would have affected my script and i would’ve have to changed it to a more interesting but overall i think my video that i used to show the audience was very good and it will be different if everyone also made a video.
I improved a lot by first explaining my connotation without using much detail and then i slowly understand how to use the connotation and i improved a lot when i was explaining to the parents and the teachers.
I am proud of my advertisement as i included right images to support my audio and also included lots of nice sentences to support the claim and how grow a garden helps you calm down.
Some challenges is that i restarted because i didn’t really like my first topic and i switched to advertisement and i still think i did pretty good and i also changed my script mid way.
If i could redo the assignment i would change the way i wrote my script and i would try to prepare more at home.
I would tell my self to use more of the time at home to read to the other people near me.