Write a short paragraph explaining what the task was and why you chose to do your presentation in this format.
I chose this way of presentation because I think a choose your own adventure book is super interesting and recently, we had an author visit that I was inspired deeply and that I wanted to write a choose your own adventure book which this project gave me a perfect chance of doing it.
Write one thing that you think you did well
I did well in writing the story because I used a lot of time
Write one thing you think you need to work on for next time
I think i need to work on my design for me book because even though the story is very very good, my design for the book wasn’t so good which lead to not many people coming to my presentation stand.
I did well on writing my hook and my start and my evidence which I have chosen pretty good evidence that sticks to the topic such as getting evidence of how places had a economic growth because of ATV and like how some people rely on ATV for a living which helps my point of ATV has negative and positive points. I also did well in my start because I feel like my hook is very interesting and after asking some of my friends, I have got many positive reviews.
One thing I still need to learn to do.
I still need to work on my reasoning because my reasoning is not good, I only have repeated what I have for evidence which is something that I am very sad of, if I didn’t repeat my evidence I would have gotten a pretty perfect essay.
In this unit, we have learned on how to calculate tax and tips which is very very important in our life going on. This is something that I am interested, so I am very good at calculating these using a formula which I got all correct in my final unit test which I am very proud of. The things that I could improve on is the part of drawing graphs of the situations using line graphs because I had made mistakes on drawing those kind of graphs, at the same time, I need to work on being more careful on what I wrote and how specific I wrote because I lost a point on my line graph only because it wasn’t specific enough. I can improve on these by being more careful on what I wrote, and double checking what I have wrote after I am done to make sure that I don’t make dumb mistakes such as not drawing the graph specific enough which that would improve my total score and would improve my whole life by being more careful.
What was the essential question you chose to answer?
B: How do our body systems work together when we play our favorite sport?
How did what you learn about cells and human body systems help you to answer this essential question?
Those helped me by knowing how they work so that I can guess or make a scientific assumption on what they could do.
How does this relate to the idea that the body is a system of subsystems made up of groups of cells?
It make the statement of the body is a system of sub systems true by proving that cells, tissues, muscles and organ systems work together
Which learning experience was the most impactful or memorable for you as a learner?
The presentation is the most impact full because it made my present skills better
Explain why by reflecting on the type of learner you are.
I am a very slow learner and that I am very very scared of presentations but during that presentation, I feel very very happy and I felt no pressure
If you could improve ONE aspect of your learning in this unit as a whole, what would it be and why? Provide a change that could enhance future learning experiences.
I would improve my body system project because it didn’t work that well and that it didn’t look that well.
Exceeding: I help my group work better (include others, stay positive, solve problems, move us forward).
Meeting: I participate, listen, and do my share most of the time.
Approaching: I try, but I sometimes distract, stay quiet, or need reminders to work well with others.
Beginning: I often struggle to work with others respectfully and need support to collaborate.
How would another student describe your collaboration in class?
They would describe it as very active but maybe a little too active and sometimes gets offtrack
What will you do to improve start
I can talk less when collaborating and I need to keep on track when collaborating to make sure that I get my stuff done and my friends get their stuff done.
In this unit, we have learned on how to calculate tax and tips which is very very important in our life going on. This is something that I am interested, so I am very good at calculating these using a formula which I got all correct in my final unit test which I am very proud of. The things that I could improve on is the part of drawing graphs of the situations using line graphs because I had made mistakes on drawing those kind of graphs, at the same time, I need to work on being more careful on what I wrote and how specific I wrote because I lost a point on my line graph only because it wasn’t specific enough. I can improve on these by being more careful on what I wrote, and double checking what I have wrote after I am done to make sure that I don’t make dumb mistakes such as not drawing the graph specific enough which that would improve my total score and would improve my whole life by being more careful.
In this swimming unit, I have gained a lot of more courage on standing on people’s back and jumping into the water. I am also very happy and glad to do backflips and front flips in the water with no hesitation because I might get water in my nose or eyes. I have grown in this unit a lot, from increasing my swimming skills to increasing my artistic swimming skills.
I am proud of my scores and my understanding on what mirror and windows are because they were the hardest part and I’ve got full points of them which I am super proud of because most of the other kids got at least wrong.
What were some challenges for you?
One challenge is that I forgot that mirrors were supposed to reflect on your life which I forgot and reflected in on “most of the chinese americans” Which got me a half score for the last two questions.
If you could redo the assessment, what changes would you make?
I would change the target in the mirror question from chinese american to myself because that was the only question that I’ve got wrong which I felt very very sad.
What will you do between now and the next formative to ensure you meet standards?
I would change the main subject of my mirror question to me instead of other people.
What advice would you give yourself moving forward?
