Feedbacks and improvement
Feedback 1 (Raymond): He should speak slower.
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The first presentation, I am very nervous, even though I know I am just talking to my classmates. So, I wanted to rush through it (a bad thing). On the second presentation, I spoke slower (a good thing).
Feedback 2 (Walter): Note cards
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The first presentation, I am not so prepared, so I need to look at my notecards. So, before the second presentation, I peer practiced with Aditya. It worked well.
Feedback 3 (Ruby): Speak in a more formal tone, and needs more practice.
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I am terrible at English. I just couldn’t speak in a formal tone! I tried to use more complex words. I did practice before the second presentation.
Feedback 4 (Alice): Maybe a little less with your hands, it makes you seem more nervous. Also don’t correct yourself. Don’t repeat “on the other hand” too much.
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I am very nervous, so I forgot whether or not I did hand gestures on the second presentation. I am very scared that whether or not I will make a mistake, so when I make a mistake, I will correct myself. I tried to use better phrases, and “on the other hand” is the only one I can remember… So I use it…
Something I am proud of in this unit
Something I am proud of in this unit is the final media project (not the presentation though). I made 2 different newspapers about the Nepal protest. One is the protester’s perspective (pro-protesters), one is the government’s perspective (pro-government).
1. I picked a good topic : )
2. I used a good AI : )
3. I used a good template : )
4. I found a good picture : )
Something I need to work better in this unit
Something I need to work better in this unit is the final media presentation. I am super nervous about presenting in front of people, even though they are my classmates. Also, I am not so good at English. So, I need to work better in public speaking and ELA.
What is BIAS? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Bias is a way authors use to change the way readers think. (mostly about an event)
For example, a normal headline for a protest would be, “Protester are Marching Around the Government Building at 25:61 P.M.” While biased headline might be, “Crazed Protesters are Surrounding the Government Building at 25:61 P.M.”
The first headline would INFORM the readers. But the second one would PERSUADE the audiences that the protesters are actually terrorists. Which successfully changed the way readers think about the protest.
Impacts of people having the same perspective
A positive impact of people having the same perspective might be when you are collaborating with another student in creating a project. When the both of you have the same perspective of this project, there will be no conflict happening (or less). Also you could work better and more efficiently because there would be no need of changing plans.
While on the other hand, a negative impact of people having the same perspective might be when there is a larger group of people (even a country). When all of the people in the country have the same perspective, there will be no chance of improving and making the country better, because there will be no different ideas about the topic. No one would be able to give any advices.
Example: In ancient China, Qin state had a law that said that people can only be a farmer or a soldier, which stopped intellectuals to give different ideas. So when Qin became a dynasty, there are no people who can give advices to make the dynasty improve. This is one of the reasons that Qin dynasty only lasted for 14 years.